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*BlackCatPro*


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I've opened my point commissions back up! Go check out my profile for more info~


>u< Finally finished! This is for my amazing, superduper awesomesqueak friend~ *Coolginn! <33
Please go and watch her~ her art is amazing and she's just plain awesome, and you can eat her. ouo

So, I saw she opened these amazing adoptables, and I just couldn't decide which one to adopt! ;~; Then I picked this beautiful gal~
She is just... so awesome Dinneh. eue Thankyou so much~

So, another addition to my small family of OC's! ^u^ I have currently recruited~ Java, Fae, Spark, and IthinksomethingSnowey'sdoingformee! <33 I can't wait! ^3^

Sorry Dinneh~ made a few minor adjustments, but I hope it all looks okay! ouo""""""
I just love her bandana by teh way, it just suits her so well! And her markings and design ish just so amazing. Thankyou for this beautiful creature! <33

I've named her Spark by teh way. ouo It just suited her personality, in my mind. And I'll do a proper ref sheet for her as soon as possible! >3< As soon as I've done one for Fae+Java!

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Character © Coolginn|Blackcatpro(Does it belong to me now? o~o I'm so confused!)
Art © Blackcatpro|Me
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Hello *BlackCatPro! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="19" height="19" alt=":la:" title="La la la la"/>

I think you are an incredible artist for your age. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>

To improve on this piece, however, I think that you should not make the "fluffs" of hair in just different parts of the body and be consistent. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>

Also, the tail can be improved on by being a little thinner. It's thicker than the legs which looks quite unrealistic.

Something else that I would like the bring up is the redness under the subject's eye. Why is that there and does it mean something?

Lastly, I know that this was intentional, but I'm not a huge fan of the way the image seems the disappear towards the bottom. I should definitely be able to see the bottom of the paws at least a bit translucent, don't you think?

I hope this helps! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/n/n…" width="35" height="31" alt=":#1:" title="#1"/>